Sunday Salon Assignment- Pick 1 of these stanzas and write a following stanza

We arrive
believing in the drama of our lives
but we are dancers between acts
who kick their way across the stage
a brief time tapping our way through the lights
helping the audience pass the time between
the main and ancient show


there exist times and places
where the sun shines when it rains
where a man leans into a woman
to share something
a bite of cookie        a secret joke
maybe he tells her she's pretty
and she looks down       still shy at 60


Can it be
there is a place          
to be touched 
stirred as if with a spoon
that creates an eddy    that swirls open    the place where sorrow
and love interchange parts     yet always fit

a place
one must pass through to arrive


















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